the main issue with your sales page


After strategising & writing copy for launches that generated $2m+ in client sales, I've seen it all.

But there are two issues that course creators seem to come up against...

- student feedback isn't collected regularly (or automatically) in funnels resulting in a scramble when your launch date rolls around

- testimonials lack strategy, meaning they don't reflect the top objections or messaging points

*98% of consumers read reviews when making a buying decision*

You see, there's psychology behind using social proof - often, we'll look to other people to guide us towards making a decision (like when you ask your coach or friend "What should I do next?").

Tweak your testimonials strategically so you can leverage this herd mentality and attract right-fit customers.

Here's how I created a Student Success Engine for a recent client, who sells a coaching program:

🔥 I added custom surveys into the evergreen funnel to capture student feedback at different stages

🔥 While those surveys were collecting feedback, I messaged mined through the student Facebook group for reasons why people joined the program and ran interviews to get more in-depth info

🔥 Based on the research, I tweaked the sales page copy (this client's messaging was pretty accurate!), optimised testimonials, added new ones which answered student objections & added statistics to show the students' success.

🔥 PLUS I created & implemented systems which will capture all of this automatically for my client...

This means that 1) she has an optimised sales page which answers the top student objections and 2) she can launch at any time, without faffing around with last-minute surveys or copy tweaks!

And she gave me this awesome feedback last week👇

What issues do you run up against in your funnel?

Cheers,

Nic

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Nicola Moors | online course strategist & copywriter

Helping multi-6 and 7-figure business owners to sell out their digital products, programs and masterminds. In 2025, I've helped my clients sell 2,705 courses with an average project ROI of 1442%.

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